compare your way of life to that of your parents and contrast them with each other. which way of life will be more satisfying for future generation?
Comparing my way of life to that of my parents, I believe that mine can be better for future generation than my parents'.
My life is closely knitted with the objective data from a variety of resources, especially the internet. Internet has dramatically changed my life in comparison with my parents' life. I can sit in front of my laptop computer and search for whatever I want in the virtual space. However, my parents made a huge effort to find the answer of their questions by reading books or asking from other people, who may not have first hand or correct information.
Moreover, I have ve...
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