Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to spend your money on an object that will last a long time than it is to spend your money on an experience (such as a vacation, concert, etc.) that will last only a short time. Use speci

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to spend your money on an object that will last a long time than it is to spend your money on an experience (such as a vacation, concert, etc.) that will last only a short time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe that, Decide about to spend money for an experience or an object that will last a long time is an important part of our live. Most of the people try and work hard to get a money and it is important that we how to spend our money. Some people believe that, it is better to spend their money on an experience such as vacation, concert or other amusing things, others disagree. In my view, it is better to spend my money on an object that I have an object for a long time for two important reasons.

First, I will keep and use the object for a long time during my life. For example, when I was 25 years old, I bought a camera with excellent brand and quality and I use the camera until now, of course my family can use of the camera every time they want, also when we have a party or go to the vacation, we take a photos of ourselves, nature, our friends and family. As you can see, we will keep our good days and memories that we had with the best people in our life.

Second, it is a good way to keep and save money. For instance when I start to learn English language for TOEFL exam, most of my friends went to some education and attend class, some of them were satisfy but some of them were not, they think that attend classes are waste time and they could not improve themselves to learn English language in the limit time in the classes. However I bought some electronic package and registered to one of the best institution that work with electronic method, called Notefull which won’t expire never and after me, my brother can use of the package, ebook and webpage.

We can conclude that if we spend money on object for a long time, it has very benefit such as keep, use and save money for a long time in during our live. Also it is very economical.

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