Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I personally believe that making an important decision must be discussed with close people, who knows you very well and understand exactly what do you want, otherwise it could be really destructive and waist of time. At the same time, each person should be able to make decisions on their own, because we do not always have the opportunity to consult with family members.

First of all I think that important decision have to be discuses with person who knows you very well and wish you all the best. For me it is my mother. She knows exactly what I am looking for and gives me a precise advice. For instance, many years ago I decided to buy an apartment in an agency which was almost broken, but with my mother getting involved I avoided making an immense mistake. If I had not asked my mom for her opinion, I would have lost a lot of money which I had saved throughout ten years.

But at the same time I have to note that there are some situations when you have to take a risk and give a quick response, which means that you have to make some decisions alone, relying only on your own experience and knowledge. These situations are everywhere and they teach us to go forward and learn from our own mistakes. I remember when I had a job interview I was asked to start working immediately or never. It was highly responsible job, but I took a risk and gave immediate answer. If I had not taken that risk, I would have regretted about it for the rest of my life.

In conclusion I would like to say that our life is full of situations in which depending on our decision you will succeed or not. You have to be always ready to make an important decision alone, while discussing with you family members sometime prevent you from making mistakes. In any case, the final decision is best taken alone in order not to blame close people in the wrong advice.

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