Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Television is great and amazing invention of human mind. It is very reliable source of information and communication and enjoyment. Some would argue that Television has destroyed communication among friends and family members. Others would say, that Television is great source of enjoyment and it has helped friends and family to stay closer and make the boding between them strong. While there are argumnts to be present on the both sides of the issue and this issue is controversial, a closer examination reveals that Televisions has helped in strengthen the bonding between family members and friends.
Consider the example of of a T.V. show which everybody in a famly like to watch and enjoy. So irrespective of where they were, all of the family member will be having a get-together kind of situation when the show is broadcasted. All the family members of the family will have a great time while watching the T.V. For Example I have a friend whose family is very much and always inclined to watch every football match that comes on T.V. So all the people of his family, his father, mother and his siblings assembles when ever there is match going on T.V. They all really love to watch it together.
Others might cite, that despite television is great source of enjoyment and information. It has deteriorated the bonding between friends and family members. For example one may provide an example of the fact some time televsion can lead to high school students and college students to become a wrong person. To become addicted to wrong habits. Because of this the family members might scold the students and there may little skirmishes between them.
In sum, while there are arguments to made for sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages to have Television. Certainly, with the support of the aforementioned reasons the fact Television has strengthen the bonding between and friends outweighs its counterpart. Television is a great source of enjoyment. If used properly it can be boon for us. It should be used as medium of educating the students and it should be used building great relationships between friends and family members.
Sentence: In sum, while there are arguments to made for sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages to have Television.
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Sentence: While there are argumnts to be present on the both sides of the issue and this issue is controversial, a closer examination reveals that Televisions has helped in strengthen the bonding between family members and friends.
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Sentence: Consider the example of of a T.V. show which everybody in a famly like to watch and enjoy.
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Sentence: For example one may provide an example of the fact some time televsion can lead to high school students and college students to become a wrong person.
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