Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to university libraries Use specific reasons and examples to give your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to give your opinion.

In a university education and sports both are important, both type of education have their own benefits. University should prioritize its responsibilities and necessities to utilize best facilities for students. I agree that university should give money to library. Here are some reasons and examples.

First of all, cost of the books outside the university is so expensive for students to afford. Good library facility helps students to use library materials instead of buying. Many students financial condition makes them hard to enter the university. Such students can utilize the varieties of books from different fields. Library is the only place where students can gain enormous knowledge.

In addition, up dating library by installing new technological computers, more internet facility, books, magazines, journals help students to learn more. For example, if a student have a project to do, he/she can sit hours together to research about the topic and refer magazines and journals for more data, stuff internet for current information. Which helps student to complete this project successfully.

Furthermore, by gaining knowledge and getting good score in a university for students helps to get a good job and settle well in career. Knowledge is the powerful tool for a student to achieve his/her goal. Not many students participate in sports but many students go to library.

In conclusion, university should prioritize its needs and make excellent facilities to students. In my view knowledge is first priority than sports.

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Need some arguments for sports too.

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