Do you agree or disagree with the statement that school should finance social activities rather than students' diets.

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that school should finance social activities rather than students' diets.

It is general truth that students' education does not only consist of learning academic subjects, it is also important for students to develop social skills. However, in spite of this indisputable fact, I still insist on my own opinion that students' healthy diets lies before the social activities and I would explore only two primary ones here.

First of all, school has responsibility and duty to guarantee students' diet, especially when our food has been overpolluted and overindustrialized. As you see, the sheer volume of cheap food we produce nowadays has already threatened to overwhelm us...

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