Integrated writing task "Mary Celeste"

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Integrated writing task "Mary Celeste"

The professor in the lecture casts doubts on the three theories that are mentioned in the reading passage in regard to Mary Celeste ship, which is also called the "Ghost Ship" that was found abandoned, off the coast of Portugal in 1872.

First of all, the professor contradicts the theory that is suggested in the reading passage of how a mutiny might have been aboard the ship, and had killed the captain and his family, and then throw them out of the boat. As according to the professor, the captain of the ship was known to be a revered man, who really had a good reputation. Therefore, such a t...

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Sentence: Therefore, such a theory is not a logestic one to him.
Error: logestic Suggestion: logistic

Sentence: On the other hand, the reading passage suggests that the alcohol theory does not seem applausable.
Error: applausable Suggestion: ?

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Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 9
No. of Words: 311 250
No. of Characters: 1417 1200
No. of Different Words: 145 120
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.556 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.283 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.913 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.917 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.621 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4