It is important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study sceince and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
A student should have a opportunity to gain knowledge in everything. The academic subjects, music, dance, sports because as they grow old they must stick to only few subjects which help them to lead to get a good job or in which they have interest .If i am asked which are the subjects between history,literature and science,mathematics that to be given importance, my answer would be studying science and mathematics. I will explain my reasons in following paragraphs.
Firstly, studying a subject should primarily help the students to get a good job and a promising future. Buy giving importance to history and literature students this cannot be given to students. learning history would only help us know how our anceisters lived and also many things about how they developed the country and so but may help the student to find a good job with good earning required for living happily in this technical world which is present now.
Secondly, science is the subject that deals with the life of a person. Knowing more about that subject would help the person to guide himself to being healthy and which is when he can perform his works efficiently. Having good insight into sciences help the people to help others in emergencies and save life of others which learning history or literature more cannot do.
On other hand, technology which includes the sciences and mathematics are the subjects which are used in technologies that make human life eassy than before .
All in all, though learning history and literature is important but not as studying the science and mathematics which are needed for a students better future, help them stay healthy.
Sentence: Having good insight into sciences help the people to help others in emergencies and save life of others which learning history or literature more cannot do.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and learning
Sentence: On other hand, technology which includes the sciences and mathematics are the subjects which are used in technologies that make human life eassy than before .
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: make human life easier than before .
Sentence: Buy giving importance to history and literature students this cannot be given to students. learning history would only help us know how our anceisters lived and also many things about how they developed the country and so but may help the student to find a good job with good earning required for living happily in this technical world which is present now.
Error: anceisters Suggestion: ancestors
Sentence: On other hand, technology which includes the sciences and mathematics are the subjects which are used in technologies that make human life eassy than before .
Error: eassy Suggestion: easy
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