It is more important to keep your old friends that it is to make new friends
I agree on this point that," It is more important to keep your old friends that it is to make new friends". There are some reasons to make my opinion to in favour of this given statement.
The first reason is that, my old friends are well know to my behaviour and habits.They know me very well because we spend lot of time together. So for any mistake they never scold on me because they know my nature. For instance, in last week I forgot to wish my friend on her birthday. She never took it seriously because she knew me that I was busy in my study so possibly I forgot to wish. This gives you advantage that your old friends konw your nature but this not happened with your new friend. In this sitution it may possible that my new friend get angry on me because I forgot to wish.
The second reason is that ,trust. you can trust on your old friend than my new friend.You can share any things with your old friends than new friends. You can disscuss your personal problems with your old friend without any hegitation. Why this is happened? It's natural because you know your old friend from many time. You believe that your old friend alway help you in your problem. Moreover your old friends give their own time to solve your problem. However you can dissuss your problem with new friend but as they are new friend,may be they are hegitated to contribute their help to solve your problem.
Lastly I say that, I am not totally against to the given point that new friends are mot important than old friends but you can't make it istantly more stronger friendship. You have to give some more time to make your friendship deeper and stronger as your old friends.As everybody say "Time is solution to all problems".
Sentence: There are some reasons to make my opinion to in favour of this given statement.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and in
Sentence: In this sitution it may possible that my new friend get angry on me because I forgot to wish.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to may and possible
your old friend alway help you in your problem.
your old friends always help you in your problems.
Sentence: However you can dissuss your problem with new friend but as they are new friend,may be they are hegitated to contribute their help to solve your problem.
Error: dissuss Suggestion: discuss
Error: hegitated Suggestion: hesitated
Sentence: Lastly I say that, I am not totally against to the given point that new friends are mot important than old friends but you can't make it istantly more stronger friendship.
Error: istantly Suggestion: instantly
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Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
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No. of Different Words: 138 200
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.291 0.07
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