Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Museum is one of the best attraction places to visit in every country. In museums, various precious and famous historic things are preserved by Government. Visiting museums allow us to gain knowledge about the history of that place or country. Museums are attraction and educational places, and for that reasons people visit museums.

First, museums explain the tradition of that place; how people used to live in ancient times; what they used to fulfill their basic needs; and how they entertained. This type of museum is historic museum which explains more about history. There are various types of museums such as Science museums, Arts museums, and Cultural museums. Every museum takes care of related things. People visit museums according to their choices. Some visit Science museums because they are interested in science. Some visit arts museums as they love arts such as paintings, handcrafts and similar things.

Second, museums are attractions to visitors because of its architecture. People get attracted to such museums because of their internal and external structures. They love to take pictures there for memories. Museums are generally situated in the heart of the cities. At such places, there are many shops where people can buy replicates of the things which are in museums.

In addition, museums are very importance places for educational tours where students can individually see the things which they already have learned in books. These educational tours are not only educational, but also motivational to students.

Finally, government charges us to visit the museums, but from that money government takes care of all precious things and makes us available to see. I believe this cost is equal to nothing as what they are doing is much more costly than what we are paying. As explained above, it is the best attraction and most importantly addition to our knowledge.

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