People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Staying healthy is our innate right. Since very ancient time, people have been trying to develop techniques and procedures for staying healthy. Being healthy should be our first and foremost priority. In the morning, I do a meditation and yoga, followed by enjoying healthy food in the noon and jogging and exercise in the evening.
First of all, I do meditation in the morning. I adapt the technique of, Pranayam. In this technique we inhale a long breath and hold it for a moment than exhales. By doing this we allow oxygen to distribute thoroughly, in our mind and body. This technique of medit...
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Sentence: These exercises keeps my body in proper shape.
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Sentence: In summery, I use meditation in morning, proper healthy lunch in the noon along with Jogging and exercise in the evening.
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