You are hereQuestion: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


tTONY FRANKIE's picture

By tTONY FRANKIE - Posted on 07 October 2013

Essay topic: 

Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Always telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A relationship plays an crucial part in our lives. It mainly provides comfort and relieve to us during hard struggling times. But sometimes situations are not felicitous as per our requirement then it’s not easy to tell them truth. So always telling truth is not most important consideration in any relationship. I will declaim my reasoning by taking three examples into consideration.

First, truth is always hurtful. For instance, my aunt was diagnosed with cancer. She was vacillating at final stage of cancer. Doctor told us that she is not going to make it and time left for her is around 2 weeks. When my aunt asked from us that what doctor told about reports, we became numb and no one of us have courage to tell her truth that she is not going to make it and she will die with in two weeks. Here if we would have told her truth then she would have not enjoyed the last days of her life. But evading truth was relieving for happiness sake of her and us. Situations makes us do what it desires.

Hence, in addition to some times we may confront some situations in which inadvertently we do some mistakes which we are not supposed to do. But sometimes it’s inexorable. For elaboration take example of husband and wife, wife demanded some jewellery from his husband. But due to time constraints always he was not able to purchase it. So now, if he tells her then argument can lead to disastrous scenario, but if he hides the truth and makes excuse that jewellery shop was not opened or he has given order for making it. Then she will get comfort and also she can sleep nicely without worrying that his husband is not callous person. He cares for her. Here, both were happy just by hiding the truth which can upset his wife, which he cares because he loves her.

Finally, children does lot of mistakes during their childhood. Sometimes they break expensive things which are precious and invaluable. But they lie keeping the fact away because it will upset their parents and it’s not like they did it on purpose. So truth became patty if it can hurt happiness of our loved ones.

So example of husband and wife, children and parents and my aunt shows that in these cases, if truth is told then it will hurt someone emotionally very bad. But what worth is relationship who can not provide happiness to our loved ones. The truth is not everything which is essential in lives because love and affections are more dominant . So it evinces my reasoning for holding my opinion.

Average: 8.3 (3 votes)
Tags
More essays by this user:
Looking for speaking partner/tutor/chat? Join the instant conversation now!
    
Something about you
Choose a nickname and enter at least one ID (Skype, MSN, QQ, ICQ or Yahoo) if you want to be listed!
Registered users only
Loading...
(59 users watching; 1 users on the list)
People online
Nickname Sex L Country Favorite topics Contact

Term
Books can be divided into two main types: fiction (novels and stories) and non-fiction (histories, biographies, and self-help books, for example). Which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read? Use specific reasons and details to suppo titalum TOEFL
Describe the streams by using the information in the reading passage and provide example of the way that they affect air travel deepali1234 Integrated TOEFL Writing
Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. ambikap TOEFL
College days are the best days in person’s life: Agree or disagree Lauren TOEFL
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. ronxyz TOEFL
Sample TOEFL essay: do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer sheppard TOEFL
What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. zeezoo TOEFL
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Money can't buy happiness.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. pkesf52513 TOEFL
Integrated essay suggested in TPO19 hajarisfahan Integrated TOEFL Writing
122)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. magicsk TOEFL

Term
Some people believe that in high school, boys should be in classes with only boys, and girls should be in classes with only girls. Other people believe that high school classes should be coeducational, with students of both genders studying together. Whic venous sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students learn more in large lecture classes than in small discussion classes. venous sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including kings and writers, his memoir has b ket2014 Integrated TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students learn more in large lecture classes than in small discussion classes. pazhakh Independent TOEFL Writing
Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. writwik Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Neha Ghosh Independent TOEFL Writing
Reading- 4-Day Workweek The popular 5-day workweek has long been a staple in U.S. business. With employees working 8 hours a day for a total of 40 hours a week, it has been seen as a model of efficiency. However, some companies and government agencies hav ket2014 Integrated TOEFL Writing
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Neha Ghosh Independent TOEFL Writing
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Amin Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Technological progress has made us lazy. venous Independent TOEFL Writing

Some people believe that in high school, boys should be in classes with only boys, and girls should be in classes with only girls. Other people believe that high school classes should be coeducational, with students of both genders studying together. Whic venous sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students learn more in large lecture classes than in small discussion classes. venous sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. writwik sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement-It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. mnamh sticky icon Independent TOEFL Writing
Superpower food -integrated food ket2014 Integrated TOEFL Writing
Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. writwik Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Neha Ghosh Independent TOEFL Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. masoud.r Independent TOEFL Writing
TPO 1 q2. masoud.r Independent TOEFL Writing
Agree or disagree?Successful person try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already doing what they already know to do well. Behnushh Independent TOEFL Writing
essayE-rater's picture

Sentence: Situations makes us do what it desires.
Description: The fragment Situations makes us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace makes with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive

Sentence: For elaboration take example of husband and wife, wife demanded some jewellery from his husband.
Error: jewellery Suggestion: jewelry

Sentence: So now, if he tells her then argument can lead to disastrous scenario, but if he hides the truth and makes excuse that jewellery shop was not opened or he has given order for making it.
Error: jewellery Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.345 21.0

You have a lot of 'But' in the sentences. Be sensitive to use 'On the other hand', 'However','Nonetheless','But' in the essays.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 445 350
No. of Characters: 1983 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.593 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.456 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.394 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.345 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.953 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.586 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.255 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.446 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5