Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Quality of music Is degrading according to some people but it is improving according to some people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Quality of music Is degrading according to some people but it is improving according to some people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Music quality is determined by how much passion is imbibed and how much presumptuously artist is gone beyond conventional music thinking as well as composition ability. Unfortunately due to some external factors, Music Quality is shook and ultimately ended as a degradation in music quality. I will declaim my reasoning my taking three examples into consideration.

First, rapacious behavior for making more money. For instance, now artists and bands are more interested for concerts and shows rather than producing some breakthrough compositions as well as harmonies. Plethora examples are there for this reasoning e.g. Rihanna, Bruno mars, Michael Jackson etc. During early development as artists they put up great passion but it diminished during embryonic state when they gained popularity. Finally they all ended up as a producer of degraded music quality. It effected time which they spent for composing new songs of albums too.

Hence, in addition to greediness, time for composing music is contributed very parsimoniously by new young artists. They want to hit markets with their prolific albums and songs but one True artist is recognized by his music compositions not by how many songs he composes. For instance, there are very less band and artists who is maintaining their composing skills and producing awesome music. Bob Marley is one of legend in music. His passion towards music can be felt by hearing his mellifluous voice and his composed breakthrough music which he produced his own. The result is that he Is still alive in our heart even though he is not in this world.

Finally, collaboration with different music artists is less seen now days. Everyone wants to have their right on music composition rather than working as collaborated artists. Which provides them popularity as well as place in hearts of their aficionados. In old times English artists had collaborated with artist from Spanish, French and Italian etc. Pink Floyd has produced so many songs by collaborating with Spanish artists and finally they maintained 1st place for around six-seven years on billboard because of their versatility in music compositions.

These example states that new artists are more interested in money rather than quality. They spent less time for composing music and major time for concerts and shows. They brought end to collaboration of artists to produce hit tracks. So these examples declaim my reasoning that Music quality is degrading day by day.

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Sentence: Music quality is determined by how much passion is imbibed and how much presumptuously artist is gone beyond conventional music thinking as well as composition ability.
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