Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion
If I were that person, I prefer to move in search of another place because I could get new community over there to be my family, I could across cultures with them and I will not feel boring certainly. My arguments from those points listed as below.
The first reason why I would like why I decide to move in new community is I want having a family whenever because building a family whenever we are is good. For an example, If we need a hand, and our position in someplace we don’t know. Absolutely in this case, we need hand from other people who live in that place. Thus, after we get a hand, we have to building good relationship, we should keep in touch with them in order to we not lose them because creating family in someplace should not from brother and sister we have.
In addition, if you move to other places you could cross culture’s outside. There is variety of culture in this world. Every community certain has to have different customs and it is good as education. For instance, Indonesia especially, it has numerous of customs in each tribal culture and it often used as methods study in school. That is why Indonesia has little garden which combine from all provinces in Indonesia, There is Taman Mini Indonesia Indah.
Besides, I feel boring also If I have to stay in the same place. There is nothing I can take from same people. I know that I gave to move in order to I am not feel boring.
In summarize concern what we have discussed, moving to another place it would be good for me because I can get new family, learn culture and lose bored.
Sentence: If I were that person, I prefer to move in search of another place because I could get new community over there to be my family, I could across cultures with them and I will not feel boring certainly.
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Suggestion: Refer to could and across
Sentence: The first reason why I would like why I decide to move in new community is I want having a family whenever because building a family whenever we are is good.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and I
Sentence: Every community certain has to have different customs and it is good as education.
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Suggestion: Refer to community and certain
Sentence: I know that I gave to move in order to I am not feel boring.
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Suggestion: Refer to to and I
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