Some people spend their entire lives in one place.Others move a number of times throught their lives,looking for a better job,house,community,or even climate.Which do you prefer

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Some people spend their entire lives in one place.Others move a number of times throught their lives,looking for a better job,house,community,or even climate.Which do you prefer

Every of us try to make our lifes meaningful with starting from some where. Some of people want to stay where they were born and grow up also stick to their values,and some others search for new adventures through their lifes. There are two options, and ı would definitely prefer to live in distinct places in abroad rather than shutting myself in the same place. Meeting new people, learning different cultures including languages and improving myself are the excellent examples. I shall explain details for my stance in the following paragraphs.

As for me, everbody has different potential and remarkable view of points. I always would like to meet new people and learn something from him or her i.e. education, life, tastes…etc. As a case in point, while I was travelling in my Erasmus time, i had a chance to know many people each one was from different culture. They show me their countries ;teach me their languages, and accompanied me while I was having fun. Still we keep in touch , and share our daily problems.

Another thing is that all we know one language is equal to one person. With learning every new word, we can touch new lifes and attain their thoughts. To illustrate, my best friend knows two languages and promote herself to learn more. Because after each learnings, she travels to different countries and practices it with new people. It contributes her to gain new experiences.

Sometimes it becomes so hard to find a job in same place. People may want to improve themselves and boost their skills .In small cities ,it can be also challenging providing these kind of opportunities. Our lifes are fast-paced today ,and the best way is to embark on working between new communities and places.

All in all, taking all these factors into consideration, changes create progress and I believe progress is always better than waiting in the same point.

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