Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

My brother narrated that the last species of Iran’s lion was shot past day! This is just one evidence how much rare animals are endangered by human and also other effects. In this way, some people arrogantly believe that investing on them is not so vital; other aspects of essentials are more important like farmland, housing, and industry; however, in my opinion, the former case which is related to environmental debates is by far more imperative than the latter due to indirect relationships in which ecosystem is associated with human health and malign effects of technology on which human itself is under threat.

To begin with, not attending endangered animals’ most condemned result is endangering of human’s health. Of course this will occur indirectly. For example, when a specific species of animal like rabbit increases, on the one hand, their food changes, since their off-springs tend to rise; on the other hand, their predators, like foxes, increases, since they have more foods for eating. Consequently, human have to take measurements for harnessing that problem which is unbalancing between these two species to such a point that harsh toxic materials might be served, harmful for health. So, attending to controlling animal population plays a key role for human health.

Additionally, technology that once was thought to characterize as relief for man now its malign effects is so horrible. Fewer people confound air pollution that plagued human today. Smoking rose from industries and factories of chemical materials in which huge amount of CO2 and CO gas released to air every year, is an alarm that rings every day. By such condition, who still insist on allocating lands to industries?

All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, I contended that saving land for endangered animals is prior to serving them as industries. For anyone who cares about human’s health, isn't that what you think, right?

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Consequently, human have to take measurements
Consequently, humans have to take measurements

now its malign effects is so horrible.
now its malign effects are so horrible.

is an alarm that rings every day.
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