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TOEFL WRITING TASK: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES - AGREE/DISAGREE?


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By Vanan - Posted on 28 February 2013

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TOEFL WRITING TASK: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES - AGREE/DISAGREE?

Humor is what makes everyone laugh to their hearts' content. Without humor, our daily life would be bland and boring. To add spice to our lives, we always look forward to those who crack jokes and act in a jovial manner. Such is the importance and relevance of humor in today's world. Hence, I do agree that humor is one of the most important human qualities.

First of all, a good sense of humor helps us stay healthy. Recent researches all over the world have found that, people who crack jokes and have good humor are found to relatively have less chances of heart diseases compared to those who don't. More than food or exercise, it is the humor which rela ...

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Sentence: Thus, I feel that a good sense of humor confers us various benefits like: well-rounded personality, good health, problem sovling skills in a relaxed manner, quick delivery of the concerned information.
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