A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which one do you prefer?

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A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which one do you prefer?

Although business more important than agriculture in modern time and most people are involved with business in every way, farming is the first job of people in my country. People are working as a farmer in their own fields during all seasons specially in the spring and summer. Therefore, if the university close to my country wants to institute a research center, I will prefer that it be a research center on agriculture. People in my town are suffering from lots of problems in the agriculture which can be solved by more studies and researches. The important problems, to the best of my knowledge, are the problems related to irrigation and plantal varieties. Irrigation should be improved and the plants shoud be interbreeded.

A research center can be solved the problem of farmers in my town by offering a better way for irrigation. The common irrigation system done by farmers in my country is the sprinkle irrigation system in which the former pumps the water from the source to place of trees by a series of pipes. Although, due to lack of water sources and dried wells, it was a best way for the irrigation of land once, it has encountered with serious problems now. One problems is to evaporate water because of heat in the pipes which carries water from water source to the field. In addition, the pipes are closed over time and farmer are compelled to replace the pipes sometimes which is time consuming and expensive. Therefore, a research center in the university can solve these problems with the help of new technologies and unique thoughts offered by researchers.

A research center can create kinds of plant's species which are talurable to diseases, pets and cold weather as well as proliferous. Farmers in my home town are always working in their fields. But, They do not achieve enormous crops and incomes because the trees planted in their farms are not from excellent varieties. They lose lots of the harvests and crops due to the hard torrents in different seasons every year. In addition, The pesticides used by the farmers are not the best and the pests of plant have strengthened. As a result, the presence of the research center on agriculture can be very useful and practical for the people in my country, If it will provide better and endurable verities of plants.

In my opinion, people in my town need a series of studies on the agriculture rather than business as farmerring is the first source of them for making money. So, it is vital to solve the problems of farmers. The principle problems related to agriculture are lack of the perfect system for irrigation and improved varieties of plants.

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Although business more important than agriculture in
Although business is more important than agriculture in

Sentence: Therefore, if the university close to my country wants to institute a research center, I will prefer that it be a research center on agriculture.
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Sentence: Although, due to lack of water sources and dried wells, it was a best way for the irrigation of land once, it has encountered with serious problems now.
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Sentence: One problems is to evaporate water because of heat in the pipes which carries water from water source to the field.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace problems with problem

Sentence: The important problems, to the best of my knowledge, are the problems related to irrigation and plantal varieties.
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Sentence: Irrigation should be improved and the plants shoud be interbreeded.
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Sentence: A research center can create kinds of plant's species which are talurable to diseases, pets and cold weather as well as proliferous.
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Sentence: In my opinion, people in my town need a series of studies on the agriculture rather than business as farmerring is the first source of them for making money.
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