What are some of qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples

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What are some of qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples

Nobody can deny the responsibility of parents in one’s life. On the other hand, the contribution and attempt that they spend in children's life would also be venerated. From my vantage point, good parents can be distinctive from the rest by devoting adequate time to breed their children. In addition, through the breeding process, they should be patient as much as they can. Moreover, they should show their emotional feelings to children and make them confident about their love they have to them. Through the fallowing paragraphs, I will substantiate my idea.

Firstly, it is of paramount importance that parent allocate appropriate time to their children, especially in ages of childhood and juvenile. Indeed, the parents don’t have enough time to spend with children, why did they want to have them? It is rudimentary plea that every child could expect from his/her parents. During first ages of children, they can go them park, cinema, and every recreating places are available in their town. As we all know that it returns to intrinsic feature of every child that like to play much. Parents should not be negligible about this important need and try to saturate this appeal of morality of children. Not caring about this, parents would lead children to subsequent aggression, which substantially accompanied with deleterious consequences.

Admittedly, the other important key role, which qualified parents must have had, it is they should be very patient. When their children are very curious about surrounding and ask many questions, even they repeat one question more and more, or have numerous meaningless questions, they should calmly answered all of their question. Taking myself as an example, when I was around 7 years old, I used to ask very inane questions such as why the name of pot is pot?! My parents were ignoring me because they thought inattentiveness is the best way to reduce my questions. Perhaps they thought I should not ask them. Continuing that treatment has made a sense of fear, consequently a self-confidence paucity remained with me up to this age. It definitely has had very sad influence on my sprit and mentality. Therefore, being patient is so important in front of children.

What’s more, parents should care about the emotional feelings of their children, specifically youngsters. For instance, recently, I have read a brief article about the terrible conflict in one family. As a result of that controversy, the young man who was almost fifteen years old abandoned his home due to a hasty decision. The parents were really worried about him, because they don't know where he is precisely yet. Learning from these bitter events, rationale parents should hinder such happenings.

In nutshell, taking all aforementioned reasons, I can state that deserved parents are who responsible in front of their children by devoting sufficient time to them and they are kind and patient toward children, corroborating their care to them.

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Sentence: Admittedly, the other important key role, which qualified parents must have had, it is they should be very patient.
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Don't need to list reasons in the introduction paragraph. This will create a lot of duplicate words and sentences.

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