Which teacher has had the greatest influence on your life?why ?give reasons to support and develop your point?

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Which teacher has had the greatest influence on your life?why ?give reasons to support and develop your point?

Submitted by Tolug on Mon, 04/08/2013 - 08:28

My first year in the university was not fun at all, I found it very difficult to settle down and adjust to life on campus and to concentrate on my studies. i am an introvert and I was not ready to socialize or relate with other students until I met mrs pelle. My microbiology teacher.

It was our first lecture in the second semester and we had microbiology class so I went to class and sat in front so as not to mix with other students. mrs pelle came into the class with a big smile that did not go unnoticed, I immediately fell in love with her, she made us introduce ourselves and I fel...

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