Young people enjoy life more than older people do#INDEPENDENT WRITING TASK#

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Young people enjoy life more than older people do

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I completely agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. Youth is the age of happiness and one does not have any commitments. Besides, there are lot many advantages that turn in favor of youth to enjoy life to the core. On the other hand, the old aged people have almost reached the end of their lives and their past experiences or their current condition can sometimes prevent them from enjoying life.

First of all, young people do not have any family commitments and worries. All that they have to do, is to study and take care of t...

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Sentence: They can travel to different countries of the world and enjoy the scenaries.
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