In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think, in my country, some land needs to keep in its natural condition, because population of my country is increasing day by day, and rising population automatically helps to increase housing and industry in country, especially in Metropolitan cities. If there will be more land to be left in its natural condition, then it can save us from many problems, such as health and environment related problems.
First, keeping land in its natural condition can save us from health related issue. There is a saying that, “Healthy Nature, Healthy People”. In today’s fast paced world, we can see ...
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