43. If you planned to become an elementary school teacher, would you take an elective course on child psychology or on physical education?

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43. If you planned to become an elementary school teacher, would you take an elective course on child psychology or on physical education?

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In the second reason, you developed a very long sentence which prevents you from speaking smoothly. The reason is that reasons are difficult to develop. We can put easier reasons, like:

it will be easier to find the job if I study child psychology....

I don't do sport often, so physical education will give me a hard time...

Yes, you are doing greatly nowadays and you are on the right track. But still you have issues:

issue 1: Reasons are 'too big' or so complicated. Make them simpler and easier to develop. Reasons are advantages. advantages should be very specific. TOEFL exam is designed for high school students. The exam is not going to test how good are the reasons, but how you can develop the reasons.

issue 2: Still have some hesitations. This is somehow related to the issue 1. and also means you need to practice more. listening to radios, watching more TV like CNN, submitting more speakings to testbig...will help.

if you can get rid of those two issues, we will see a great progress.