Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Not organized well.

Use this pattern:

first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 10 seconds
First, reason 1: about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2: about 15 seconds
Third, reason 3 (optional)
Conclusion: one sentence.(optional)