Some students prefer to attend a school that provides education for women only or man only. Other students prefer to attend a coeducational schools for both women and men. which environment do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and examples
Seems you have pattern sentences like 'as a case of point...' and the last conclusion sentence. Remove them if you can. Instead you can put more content.
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Seems you have pattern sentences like 'as a case of point...' and the last conclusion sentence. Remove them if you can. Instead you can put more content.