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Working at mine construction projects as an environmental engineer taught me that cost control and community issue were really hard to deal with. Construction activity should comply with agreed schedule, but without proper environmental regulations, it will be causing major ecological impacts that need a higher cost than it prevents in the beginning. Moreover, the community lived surrounding the construction area would be affected by those impacts and could become uncooperative with the projects. Therefore, to minimize impact to the environment, all mine construction activities such as land cl...
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so that it build my personality and capacity to work in an international team.
Description: The fragment it build my is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace build with verb, past tense
from another provinces, but also from other countries.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and provinces
Sentence: My research objective in this field is to find an applicable method to manage environmental change including to minimize environmental impacts caused by energy exploration in Indonesia.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by an infinitival to
Suggestion: Refer to including and to
Sentence: I will fully capable and proactive to ensure that natural resources to be managed and utilized in wisely manner not only for today's generation, but also for future's generation.
Description: The fragment in wisely manner is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace wisely with adjective
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 43 15
No. of Words: 1073 350
No. of Characters: 5749 1500
No. of Different Words: 457 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.723 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.358 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.168 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 465 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 360 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 251 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 183 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.953 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.923 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.581 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 14 5