Statement of purpose

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Statement of purpose

My interest

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Biology, used to be regarded as an imprecise and tentative method, now become the primary measure
Biology, used to be regarded as an imprecise and tentative method, now becomes the primary measure

but also lead to long-term achievement in research career.
but also lead to a long-term achievement in research careers.

describing growth of microorganisms
describing the growth of microorganisms

in future research.
in future researches.

and reading book of philosophy and literature.
and reading books of philosophy and literature.

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

A lot of 'not only...but also'

A lot of sentences with the subject 'I'

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 44 15
No. of Words: 988 350
No. of Characters: 5526 1500
No. of Different Words: 498 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.593 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.155 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 465 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 399 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 294 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 198 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.377 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.477 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.411 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5