jeffzhou

About me

stuck in the writting part of IELTS, always scored 6.5 , trying to score 7 !!

I am from

china

Goal

I am looking for a teacher/tutor

Gender

Male

Level

Upper-Interm

Member for

9 years 10 months

My essays:

• It is generally believed that education is of vital importance of individual development and well being of society What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions
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• Some people think that children who are bought up in families without a huge amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  
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• Children are under increasing educational, social and financial stress. Some people think this a positive development. Do you agree?
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• Student from rural areas find it difficult to access university education Some people think that universities should make it especially easy for them to study at To what extend do you agree or disagree
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• we are seeing a significant increase in online shopping today. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give your opinion and relevant examples(revised version)
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• Some people believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not required to learn a second language What is your opinion
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• we are seeing a significant increase in online shopping today. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give your opinion and relevant examples
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• An increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their education Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it
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• The subjects and course content for children are decided by the authorities such as the centre government Some people think that teachers should decide these for students To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
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• The table below describes the percentage of home schooled students in Somecountry in 1999 2004
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