Older workers are being neglected by employers, Is this correct?
In any developed nation or a growing economy, we need a right mix of old and young workforce. Only a country that can use the wisdom of its older generation and the energy of its younger population can excel in all fields.
In the workplace, we can observe that often old workers are neglected and their efforts are not recognised. Many factories consider old employees as non-productive people and does not take much care of their wellbeing. In contrast, younger workers are given more incentives, given promotions and rewarding opportunities in the corporate world. This trend can be linked to all workplaces across many industries because the management thinks that young adults are tech-savy and smarter than their senior employees.
Senior employess tend to feel ashamed when their ideas are ignored and are not treat equally. Their sense of belonging to the company is reduced and hence affects their productivity as well. Discrimination against older workers should be treated as a offence to curb such harrassment to senior people in the organisation.
Rewarding employees only on the basis of merit and not on any other factor can avoid such discrimination. Companies should also try to harness the potential of seniors by giving them appropriate challenges and oppurtunities. In conclusion, any discrimination in any form on the basis of a person's age should be treated as an unlawful act.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y of its younger population can excel in all fields. In the workplace, we can ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...inst older workers should be treated as a offence to curb such harrassment to sen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18859649123 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01553827169 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.081085628 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140590356084 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460528562969 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581339007808 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739129947456 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437397641219 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.