Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, others think that one should hold permanent job. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is believed that job satisfaction is of importance for one working in any organization. However, there has been an arguement that having a decent job with high security is a wiser option. While I accept that obtaining a steady position is important, I would argue that a sense of satisfaction in the workplace is more crucial. This essay will examine the arguements on both views.
On the one hand, holding a decent job that can help one stay longer in the organization may be beneficial in many ways. Firstly, a worker may feel a sense of comfortability and safety without any concern of unemployment problem. The reason is that with a certain amount of income paid monthly by the companies where he is working, he can both support their families members in raising children, paying utilities expenses and make contribution to their companies. Secondly, he does not need to waste their valuable time to seek for other jobs periodically due to his current temporary position. It is obviously a waste of time if one has to be in search of and apply for other jobs to make a living. Thus, with a permanent position with steady salary and other welfares, one can save more time for other activities such as taking care of his familiy, taking part in useful activies including playing sport, taking courses, etc.
On the other hand, working with job satisfaction can be beneficial to the employee in terms of long-term growth and mental transquility. Firstly, it is true that apart from income, work performance with recognition and appreciation, unbiased working environment are elements constituting a satisfying profession. An employee can make headway, hone his skills and improve productivity only when he is pleased with what he is doing. In the long run, not only does he feel content with his job, but also he is likely to get a higher promotion in his career ladder. Secondly, a sense of satisfaction can make employee feel happier, which to some extent motivates him to work harder and more productively. As a result, he can find his own transquility in mind as a key to success in life. Otherwise, if an employee goes to work out of obligation, not only does he have poor working performance, boredem and frustration may compel him to resign his job.
In conclusion, in a fast-growing and changing society as today, job security may be a greater priority of most job candidates. However, i believe that for a long-term growth and satisfaction, one has to feel motivated and interested in what one is doing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iority of most job candidates. However, i believe that for a long-term growth and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86542923434 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94495997072 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510440835267 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2447777578 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.368421053 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227160961596 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792927837768 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620149980671 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158626324486 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042384247895 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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