you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit
write a letter to your friend
In letter explain
the important event
apologize for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear Andrew,
Hope you will find this letter in the pink of health. I am writing to give you a good and a bad news. Firstly my brother, Anuj, is getting married next month. so unfortunately, I won't be able to visit you at Canada according to the scheduled plan.
It will be a Hindu Marriage with a lot of dancing and Indian dishes. Most rituals will held at home But marriage ceremony will took place at a hotel in our city. my whole family is very excited for this wedding.
However, I knew you were at Cloud 9 because of my upcoming visit. Thus, I would like to say you sorry and we could plan the meet in the November. Even, my brother and his wife will be able to join us.
Precisely, I found first week of November more suitable because both mine and Anuj's leaves will end on 15th of November.In addition to this winter sports will start at that time in Canada, So we can have more leisure activities to do at that time.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
With love,
Kushal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-07-04 | kushalk157 | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bad news'.
Suggestion: bad news
...th. I am writing to give you a good and a bad news. Firstly my brother, Anuj, is getting m...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...r, Anuj, is getting married next month. so unfortunately, I wont be able to visit ...
^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...ng and Indian dishes. Most rituals will held at home But marriage ceremony will took...
^^^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...held at home But marriage ceremony will took place at a hotel in our city. my whole ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...will took place at a hotel in our city. my whole family is very excited for this w...
^^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ujs leaves will end on 15th of November.In addition to this winter sports will sta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33689839572 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23540925426 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8051492224 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3846153846 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203391005739 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06588261929 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465300871665 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108799556113 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345781080129 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.