you borrowed an important textbook from the classmate last term. you now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
apologize for the mistake
find out how important the book is to her
say what you will do
Dear friend,
I hope you are in the pink of condition and enjoy your offdays with your family. I was in pitiful state when i came to know that i forgot to return your important text book which i borrowed from you in last term.
I think it is very significant for you because this book is about fact and figures of economic growth of many countries and you are preparing of competitive exam, so this book is very helpful for your further studies.
I will post this book by speed post as early as possible , for this i need your acurate address , please message me and tell me about urgency, if it is not require , i will send this by normal post.
I apologize for this mistake and looking forward for your reply.
with regards,
Surinder Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friend, I hope you are in the pink of condition ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our family. I was in pitiful state when i came to know that i forgot to return yo...
^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... pitiful state when i came to know that i forgot to return your important text bo...
^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o return your important text book which i borrowed from you in last term. I t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h i borrowed from you in last term. I think it is very significant for you be...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conomic growth of many countries and you are preparing of competitive exam, so th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y helpful for your further studies. I will post this book by speed post as ea...
^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... book by speed post as early as possible , for this i need your acurate address , ...
^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed post as early as possible , for this i need your acurate address , please mess...
^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e , for this i need your acurate address , please message me and tell me about urg...
^^
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...and tell me about urgency, if it is not require , i will send this by normal post. ...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l me about urgency, if it is not require , i will send this by normal post. I ...
^^
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e about urgency, if it is not require , i will send this by normal post. I ap...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... , i will send this by normal post. I apologize for this mistake and looking ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...and looking forward for your reply. with regards, Surinder Kaur
^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward for your reply. with regards, Surinder Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47101449275 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26941489189 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.95443735 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299549041895 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140311877556 0.0766984524023 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103078683297 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178533930125 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102027562999 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.