The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world's cities can be attributed directly to tge rapidly increasing numbet of private number of cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in tge quality of life in cities,attrmpts must be made to encourge the use of public transport.
Air pollution is increasing day by day due to high usage of private transport which is affecting the mankind adversely. In this essay, I will discuss the possible causes for this trend and suggest some of the pratical measure that individual could implement to overcome this menace
There are several causes of using own vehicles in this running life, everyperson want their own vehicle to maintain their status because they believe that ,if they have vehicle their collar of status always be high in the society but they are unaware , increment in vehicles causes several problems . Firstly, high rate of private vehicles cause air pollution as wrll as noise pollution too large extent. Also causes damage to our health because the smoke which is produced from the vehicles causes various kind of ailments such as, cancer , asthma, so on and also smoke is very toxic for animals . Furthermore, if we use private vehicles daily that result into trafgic . Sone individuals face several obstacles due to traffic jam . They got late form office due to traffic jam because they stuck there through which they lost their jobs.
There is almost no one solution to this problem often given the comlexity of its causes. However, one option to improve is to make general public aware abiut how private vehicles cause pollution like problems with our health . We should encourage the people to use of public transport because is much cheaper and suitable for the each and every individual to support public transport instead of private transport . Proceeding further, government shoukd implement some strict rules to overcome private vehicles by making public transport much comfortable and cheaper. The epitome to this in Delhi, delhi government implement the odd and even rule by which traffic problem is solved too sone extent
In conclusion , there are variety of different factors that have led to make the problem worse while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this problem , this could probably be solved by some strict laws which should be imllemented by the government
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45914216858 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.932993266 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.25 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105673113448 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431554455174 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341232327935 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750308761218 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211202573099 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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