An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.
What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the . situation?
More and more educated and skilled individuals, like healthcare workers and educators, migrate to develop countries for employment to improve their quality of life. The relocation of these professionals has caused social and economic problems in their own country. However, there are various ways to stop this phenomenon.
To begin with, the migration of professionals, predominantly from developing nations to develop country, has greatly deterred the economic progress of their homeland. This is due to the fact that there is a shortage of experienced labor force that will work in the various income generating industries in the home country. In addition, there is also a loss of revenue for the government because of movement of these tax payers to a different country. Furthermore, migration has also affected the society which is brought about by the behavioral problems of children. Young individuals growing up without the presence of their parents lacks proper guidance and discipline that is usually enforced at home. This sometimes lead kids to be involve in gangs and petty crimes. According to a study in juvenile delinquency, a significant number of these children involved crimes were brought up by a single parent or had absentee parents who were working away.
Nevertheless, there are ways for the government to stop the brain drain or the departure of highly skilled workers to a foreign country. First, there should be an increase in the monetary compensation and additional incentives for these professionals. This is because this will allow them to improve their standard of living and provide a comfortable life for their family, since these are the primary reasons as to why these people are driven to leave their country. Furthermore, another means of preventing these workers from leaving is for the government and private institutions to enhance working facilities and open more job opportunities in there home countries. Through these professionals do not need to be separated from their loved ones, thereby guide their children in their formative years. In a survey conducted among overseas workers, majority of them would consider returning home if they are given local opportunities to practice their professions.
In conclusion, there are negative effects of the migration of skilled professionals in the country’s economy and society. This is evident in the slow progress of the national economy due to lack of human resource and the effect to the family. However, there are ways to reverse the relocation these individuals by offering a higher salary and the availability of domestic employment.
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation? 73
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the . situation? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3686746988 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99762716438 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525301204819 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3424485111 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.263157895 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170501048965 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505379020062 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396537028585 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10044906655 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041927566115 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.