Technology is rapidly developing day by day to make life easier and more engaging. Even though many people think all those inventions, especially the communication ones has many negative impacts on the daily life of people such as it threatening the language, I think pros of it outweigh the cons. Also, I do not agree with that the e-mails and the text messages are destroying the language at all.
To begin with, most people use e-mail to switch formal letters, not to chat with friends because e-mail is more complicated than the other applications such as Messenger. Moreover, writing tons of e-mail is a really good practice of formal written language. Because most crucial letters and proposals sent by e-mail, a person who sends it must be good at grammar and vocabulary in order to give a great impression for the person who read their letter. I am a typical teenager who chats with my friends a lot on the internet and I can be the best example on it. I only send an e-mail to the college I am interested in or someone to get an advice. Because those e-mails are crucial for my life, my mail must be mistake free.
Furthermore, even though the text messages shortened from the actual one to save time, it does not change the structure of the sentence. Because the structure is vital for the reader to understand, it must remains the same at all time. In every language, the little changes can alter meaning considerably. For instance, if we try to explain the event that happened in the past, people need to use past tenses of English to give the right picture to the person or people who read it.
All in all, the main purpose of e-mail and the text message are to communicate effectively with each other, not to destroy the language. Also, those technologies do not damage the language because it only shortens the words.
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- TOEFL TPO 10 - Integrated Writing Task 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...ge I am interested in or someone to get an advice. Because those e-mails are crucial for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65030674847 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5795922857 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3490168949 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275042243349 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985124846883 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143609440334 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1832054121 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998717185042 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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