Some people argue that formal education should start for children as early as possible while others think that it should not start untill 7years of age.Discuss both these views and give your opion.
education is the corner stone of individual future and community developement . moreover, curiosity is always the basic characterstic of a human being . All people want to break limits and learn more . At this point some people ponder that children should begin their formal education at a very early age , while some people that it should be started the pre school time. I will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To embark upon , children who begin study at a very early age have more chance to suceed in the future. moreover , they gain more knowledge and experience which is very valuable for them.In addition, early age education would cherish the children attitude towards life.Such students get chance to interact with other classmate and can learn innovative things and enhance their ideas and skills.
on the other hand , it is controversial issue so it is diificult to comment on it.I think that every childen should start their study from the seven year .After the age of seven year pupil may have confidnce to go to school and ability to learn numerous syllbus.However,during this period children able to do things alone and learn friendly behaviour with others.moreover , early schooling develope the communication skills .
To recapitulate, i think that childen should have their careless childhood without any kind of burden and responsibilties . However, early education makes children self confident and kindness and being a successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31465517241 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99848845193 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.975171233 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.3 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304068336153 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103789402204 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923589721898 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170987017743 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866960611172 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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