SOP
I have developed my ability to communicate effectively because my job as a Teaching assistant requires regular communication with people. I work for an English center so I need to talk to students in order to connect with them and support them in studying, I have to talk to parents to keep them updated about their child's process as well as the difficulties that the kid is facing, I also communicate with teachers to know how they want to teach the class and whether they need my support. Thanks to the above experience, I have learned how to communicate effectively and convincingly but still professionally.
Besides the ability to communicate, I also gained the experience of organizing and managing events. Working for an educational institution, we regularly organize important events such as Mid-autumn festival, Halloween or Christmas. I participated in planning, preparing and organizing these events. From those experiences, I have developed the skills to plan, organize, manage and solve event-related issues.
I have a strong ability to work under deadlines as well as handle multiple tasks efficiently. I have been assigned a number of roles such as a direct supporter for students and teachers in the classroom and the person who provides information to parents about their child's learning, I am required to inform the necessary information to parents and complete my admin tasks online in a given deadline, so I learned how to manage my work productively. I always finish my work on time and with high efficiency.
In addition to the above skills, I also build good relationships at work with my supervisors and colleagues. By listening to constructive criticism from my colleagues and managers, I have improved myself a lot, I also regularly talk, give advice and maintain friendly contact with my foreign colleagues, this has helped the teaching to be smooth, efficient and enjoyable. Participating in organizing and supporting events at the center also helps me and my colleagues become closer, we create a civilized and friendly office environment together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ned how to manage my work productively. I always finish my work on time and with ...
^
Line 7, column 483, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elps me and my colleagues become closer, we create a civilized and friendly offic...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22985074627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19065241993 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4910395325 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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