It is better to instill the sense of competition instead of cooperation to succeed
what is better to succeed-------compete or cooperate is a moot question. both behaviour are counted as leadership qualities, however,
if i have to prioritize them i would endorse cooperation first and competition second.
cooperation is the theme of contemporary mutual and interdependent wold. Business, companies and countries cannot not operate in isolation
they need to join hand with friends and foes for mutual gains. the global supply chain is becoming increasingly diverse
and fragmented. for instance, idea is conceive and researched by company in USA, marketable products are manufactured in China, packaging
and are made may be in a third coutnry. The companies and states have to move with new business and trade norms to make their
products competative in the market.
furthemore, if we see in the field of science and technology open innovation is a buzzword now a day. accoding to this concept researchers pool their resoureces to get benefits of each other's
expertise and jointly conclude new solutions to the problems. this is new innovation model with increasingly acceptability as it
is not advisable to gain expertise in every field of technology rather exchaning of scientific outcomes boosts the cumulative process
of research and creativity.
on the other hand, competition is an innate instinct. every one has some sence of competition even we compete with ourselves by comparing
present with past. the sence of competition has contributed in the survival and development of human race as we competed with other
species and among ourselves to bring out the best of us. however, the extreme form of competition is likely to hinder out emotional growth.
At a stage when one wants to suceed at any cost, the negative tendencies like ego, selfishness dominates and it becomes nearly impossible to accept own's failure or other's success.
hence cooperation especially at tender stage is extremely important for positive development of tender minds to make them responsible member of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, third, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42006269592 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16993472468 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7977509931 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0625 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128322857775 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478428912448 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693836230436 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039615209735 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569767413831 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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