Some people think charity organizations should help people in great need wherever they live. However, others think they should help people in their own country. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
The proliferation of contemporary lifestyle has brought about several socio-economic debates. For instance, some people claim that financial assistance corporate should help people in great need wherever they live whilst it is also said that should help people in their own country. Both sides contain valid arguments, which will be examined in this essay.
On the one hand, proponents of the former notion claim that charity organizations should give aid to those greatest need, wherever they live if given reasonable reason. Humanitarian help those who deserve to be assistance. As the result, regardless of their origin, race, color that means everyone is equal to get the aid. In fact, there are many rich countries financial assistance institution have moved to help poor countries, such as Africa. Consequently, those who have a difficult life in less developed countries will have a better life.
As for the latter viewpoint, others people think that they should support people in their own town. First of all, even if in rich countries also have poor people and homelessness. If domestic charitable foundation do not care people in their own country, it will also lead to distance rich and poor. Thus, there are negative effects on our society, such as domestic society's vices, crime of robbery.
In conclusion, both points of view contain valid arguments. To my mind, charity organizations take along benefits to the community and help should appreciate to make the world better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, thus, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2510460251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77367043234 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3393866267 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430030736183 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120403620132 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159305071043 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239616613319 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116046472343 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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