Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behavior is now having a negative impact on society. Discuss.
As compared to the past times, a much drop in respect gesture towards parents is witnessed in our society, which has deteriorated the residing communities. However, the question is, are the children responsible for this or is it the parent’s negligence that has promoted this trend? In my essay, I would put forth the reasons that have promoted this discouraging act of children and has affected society.
Parents are the guiding paths for children but this was true only till 5-10 years ago. With the herd of providing the best of everything to their child and their own rising career graphs, the parents have neglected the basic guidance to their child thereby leaving such activities as duties for the nanny and the child care-takers. For example, in my neighborhood, there is a girl named Aanya, aged 14, who now believes her nanny as her mother and her mother as a legal authority holder. this lack of time involvement with children has weakened the love bond with parents and diminished the sense of belongingness towards the society, in which one resides. this clearly explains the reason why the children have made a decline in respecting the parents and thus affecting the society.
Advancements in technology have also lead to exposure of every little detail of everything at children's disposal. The children are using electronic gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops etc. that has bridged the gap between the children and the world and adversely made the parent-child relationship vanish. For example, my brother, living in New Delhi for his higher studies, rarely feels the need of talking with me or my parents as he is busy with the stuff such as social media and other sites. To be mentioned, all such advanced gadgets are at his usage just because my parents availed them. this indicates, how making the child face-to-face with the technology has, in turn, made them isolated from the family relations and bonds. also, depriving the child of the social duties that he owes to society.
As the above indicates, not only the children are to blame for such prevailing fashion, but it is also the parents that hold the major share of it. Efforts are required by parents to devotee time and offer only the minimal required exposure of new technologies, as per their age, so that the children value the relations and as a whole keep the society as a healthy and prospering area to dwell in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88780487805 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63549649229 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9349750186 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.882352941 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265902835497 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892763864474 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603241953128 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171944779322 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773948629269 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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