In some societies,more and more people choose to live on their own.what are the reasons people choose to do this?
is it a positive or negative trend
It is often considered that people preferences of choosing an isolated lifestyle is quite prevailing,especially in western countries.A number of people decide to live on their own in few societies which according to this essay is a negative development.However, it have some positive aspects as well.In this essay, I will discuss both view points followed by a reasoned conclusion.
There are couple of reasons which reflects the beneficial sides of living separate from the society.Firstly, people living this lifestyle are considered to be peace loving, who don't want anyone to disturb their harmoney.In other words, some people want to live their life on their own terms and try to avoid any unnecessary connection with in the society.Secondly, they avoid taking stress of things happening in community and try to stay in serenity which is beneficial for their physical and mental health.
Besides this, It is more of a negative trend to live in isolation because such cut themselves from the social circle,which deprives them from the benefits they could take while being connected to the society.Moreover, people living in societies prefer to talk to people who are quite extrovert and those who leave no stone unturned to make relationship better with their neighbours, instead of those who remain in themselves.In addition to that, people who tends to live single-family are more pron to diseases such as anxiety and severe depression.
To recapitulate,although, there may be some positive outcomes of living isolated but the negative consequences are much more.Therefore, people should take measures to increase symphony of love and care among the inhabitants of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39772727273 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43788972246 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.862728278 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.25 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.7667163134 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 7.06120827912 496% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375972590524 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223710923067 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516864342684 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223710923067 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516864342684 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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