Yong people nowadays
Everyone in this life needs to the helping and it is impossible for someone stay alive without asking for helping. Helping each other is most important for build successful environment. In all fields of our community, we need an help. For example when a doctor needs to treat someone, he will need helper who can help him in the treatment. In addition, asking for help easier for having high quality.
Nowadays, the way of communication between people has been changed like as in the past. The communication becomes through the social networks such as Facebook, Twitter, and Snapshot. These applications enable their customers to communicate electronically. As a result of the easy of communication between the communities, they did not see each other except in the public events. Therefor, while there is not visiting between people how they can help each other.
Young people do not give enough time for help their community. It refers to some reasons. One of these reasons young people become in specific places like home and work. Thus, they do not see the other people for giving them any help. On the other hand, the strong of relationships develop lower. Also, the main reason for lower relationships between the communities is young people are mainly depending on using the smart phones in all things.
In the end, we need to know each other at least our neighborhood.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-09 | ghaziahmed | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...elping and it is impossible for someone stay alive without asking for helping. Helpi...
^^^^
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...In all fields of our community, we need an help. For example when a doctor needs t...
^^
Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...between the communities is young people are mainly depending on using the smart phones in all things...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w each other at least our neighborhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, at least, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75225558778 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3885546409 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2352941176 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908285952987 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343330004772 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469444601164 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523992123766 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565189009849 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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