Being celebrities.
Nowadays, we often see celebrities being involved in controversies as well as committing suicide. The lives of renowned people are can have both negative and positive consequences. this essay will discuss why being a celebrity has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, if you become a celebrity, you are likely to have a better income than the rest of the people. Not only it allows to become popular among followers, but it also ensures that you will live a comfortable life. Bollywood stars, for instance, have several properties in their name as well as sometimes they get an opportunity to make a successful political career. In other words, renowned people are likely to face fewer troubles than other people in societies, especially in developing countries.
On the other hand, one cannot forget the fact that early success may also bring undesirable stress. Some celebrities are not equipped to deal with the enormous expectations of followers so they might involve in taking drugs. A number of Hollywood celebrities committed suicide in their early 20's just because they did not know how to deal with money and fame. To sum up, success can be stressful that might also result in the death of people.
this essay discussed why being a celebrity is good in terms of monetary gain and popularity, but it can also take the lives of people. In my opinion, if one can handle success and failure properly, the lives of celebrities have benefits than drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99596774194 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73827732729 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2952219786 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868277421352 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374252411055 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563975755803 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652229998185 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517177159696 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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