Nowadays, people are moving closer to towns and cities. What are the reasons and do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantargets
Young generations have the tendency of moving closer to town and cities to access economic developments. This trend results in both benefits as well as problems. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and point out the consequences.
there are several causes leading to urban migration, but occupational opportunities and modern education are two vital triggers. It can not be denied that almost prestigious schools which have better educational facilities and up-to-date teaching methods tend to gather in urban areas. Thus, people may prompt to migrate into cities, towns for upgrading their education levels. For example, in Viet Nam, the number of universities located in two developed cities Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh much greater than other provinces. In addition, job opportunities have attracted a large number of people from rural to urban areas. When small villages still offer employees higher physical demand vacancies, non-agricultural economic are welcoming them with trained jobs such as accountant, human resource, IT developer. In other words, employees may be paid a higher salary and convenience work environment which is not affected by bad weather condition.
In my opinion, rural-urban migration brings individual improvements, but it also poses negative consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57575757576 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03255808349 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4361257513 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814364008443 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313783175284 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501702399552 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483621611903 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403057097889 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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