Innovation of your company

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Innovation of your company

margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align: justify;line-height:200%">new Roman",serif">As being new in the local market with the target of early profit gain and to avoid risks in terms of profit, we almost do not have any significant innovation in our product yet. product centralizing and standardizing are our strategy for this stage. Of course invention is always strongly encourgaged in our corporate and something is being in our plan now, but it is not now and could be resumed at least in the next three years, after the current products much more be recognized in the local market.

margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align: justify;line-height:200%">new Roman",serif"> our product is service so we did make an innovation in our labor force supply that is staff outsourcing. this solution ifself can be called initiate or revolution only, but in our situation, I consider it is an innovation because this solution places ourself in a danger: not any firms in our group applied this so far, even regional firms located in South Asia where the labor market is similar to vietnam. they are afraid they are unable to maintain corporate’s standards leading to a declining of the business performance and brand image. we are the first country proceed this outsource and must guarantee with headquarter on the group’s standard, optimal profit and image protection. The second makes me consider it is an innovation are the contributions and savings below:

margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align: justify;line-height:200%">new Roman",serif">- monthly labor cost saved 23.7% including monthly salary, government insurances and company monthly allowances.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, at least, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 965.302439024 158% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28512396694 4.92477711251 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.13813403126 2.65546596893 269% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6344160197 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.125 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0689530543234 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281028779085 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315696870652 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474340508938 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169575436576 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 61.2550243902 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.3012195122 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.79 11.4140731707 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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