People should have the right to carry a gun, as crime rate
is on the increase
One of the most challenging issues that the modern democracies
has to face is the surging crime rate. In this scenario, many are of the
opinion that citizens should have the right to carry a gun, where as many
others argue that it may only help to further increase the crime rates.
First of all, those who support possession of weapon justify
their claim with the logic that people have a right to self-defence. As
such, having a gun comes handy in such situations as it is a useful weapon
to protect yourself from criminals who may otherwise endanger your life.
For example, my neighbour, who is wealthy, managed to scare away alleged
robber with his gun and protect his life.
Conversely, many are against letting people carry a gun as they
believe it may only help to aggravate the situation instead, leading to
more crimes. they state that as weapons like guns become easily obtainable,
irrational and illogical use of it may lead to unprecedented and disastrous
outcomes. For example, there had been cases where family members shot each
other on the spur of the moment, based on momentary emotions. Moreover, if
guns are not safely kept when there are children in the house, it may
unknowingly cause accidents and harm both the child and other members
of the family.
In conclusion, though the number of brutal crimes are peaking,
it is still not advisable to carry around guns, as more harm may come from
it than good. it might only help to escalate crime rate further. As such,
it is best that citizenry depended on the law enforcement of a nation rather
than taking matters into their own hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, may, moreover, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91814946619 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46201625574 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9050963065 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276406827658 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086291816605 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087559772812 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645376017331 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929688823845 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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