Achievements in biodiversity conservation

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Achievements in biodiversity conservation

Biodiversity conservation is one of major tasks that are emphasized in Resolution 24/NQ-TW: “Active response to climate change, improvement of natural resource management and environmental protection”. The Resolution also emphasizes that environmental protection must harmonize with nature, adapt to the law of nature, prioritize the prevention and control of environmental pollution, protect natural resources and biodiversity.

In recent years, the rapid economic growth has brought considerable economic benefits, but also has caused negative impacts on biological divesity. From 1995 to 2013, the Vietnam’s population growth increased from 73 to 89 million. The increasing population has resulted in the high level of consumption of natural resources. In addition, the global context is creating new challenges: The climate change is becoming more severe and adversely affecting the biodiversity. Therefore, Vietnam biodiversity is rapidly declining. The numbers of wild species and their populations have declined sharply. 882 rare animal and plant species with high economic value are threatened at different levels which are listed in the Red Data Book of Vietnam 2007. The biodiversity degradation is the cause of the disruption of ecological balance, directly affects the living environment and threatens the sustainable development of the country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10309278351 5.00649968141 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37439547142 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7921141381 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966635583093 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386431463728 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612093591438 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715438167724 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162997912062 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.1 11.5310837438 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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