Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get any information or advice from the Internet or book. Discuss both of view and give your own opinio.
Few believers argued that it will be better to get advice from other people when some believe information should be taken from internet or book. I will discuss both of view in below before giving my opinion.
The first and foremost, an advisor always give advice from their experienc.For example, i always take information from my parents. To be more precise, this advice helps me a lot to sort out my problem. In addition to, a person always ask a person for information. However, now a days people are getting self-confidence instead of experience. As a result, they always give flashy advice to the people who wanted information.Due to negative tendency they are always thinking about poor side of information in from the other people. Thus, these are pros and cons of getting advice from other people.
On the other argument, internet and book has various benefit. Firstly, all of this information is true which is given by internet. Secondly, people can take information at any convenient time. To illustrate, one can use google map for finding certain place in rural areas, instead of asking people. Thirdly, this information will stay long time in their memory which they read.Additionally, many of the people can not have internet connection, so they have to take information with details which is provided by other people than internet or book.
Finally, in my opinion, although there are so many benefit of both side, but drawback can not be ignored. So guidance should be taken from internet and book.
In summary , believe that people should get help from the Internet and book than other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in addition, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01851851852 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74727150367 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1486344486 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472437470939 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154121041237 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110522495168 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274057367273 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107145486844 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.