Prevention is better than cure.
Do u think government should invest more on health education rather than the hospitals . Agree or disagree?
People should always be given health awareness so that they can exactly know how to get themselves away from the harmful things that can cause problems in their lives. Health is definitely a major concern for any country or nation. People's safety should be the priority. I definitely believe that it is better to take actions rather than crying over a spilt milk.
The awareness programs should have to be the main focus for the governments now a days. As we have already seen the effect of global warming is causing a devastating problems for the whole world. Rather than waiting for the people to get affected because of it, it should be the role of the authorities who can inform the people about the preventions. For example, the new weather effect of smog has taken over almost all of the South East Asian countries like India,Pakistan and Bangladesh, all has been the major victim of this new kind of weather hazard. Though, when it hit the different part of these countries people were not aware what to do, and what are the remedies to overcome this polluted thing. So there comes the lack of concern from respective departments.
Obesity is one of the major concern all around the world. We already know that what can obesity do to an individual's health. Around more than 50% of the people in Pakistan are being the victim of this controllable disease. But unfortunately, there's no proper way of informing people what they are doing to themselves by not taking care of their own health. And eventually when they end up lying in the hospital bed because of some heart problem then they are informed to avoid certain things and take specific actions to get rid of their illness. However, the point remains the same, no involvement at first place.
In conclusion i would like to say that to whatever extent governments are investing in building the hospitals and providing funds for different places of human care they should not stop looking into the basic cause, afterall just the general know how of things can help people to keep up a healthy life cycle and live life according to the basic education they are being provided. It's never too late to start a great cause which can be benefited as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72750642674 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48412595653 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539845758355 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.871379121 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16091420233 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498263480702 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478705187658 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100793048249 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258515176565 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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