Traffic congestion
Hi guys, welcome to my presentation. Let me introduce myself, my name is Hai Anh. And my student code is A34466. Today I’m going to talk about traffic congestion. So, before we get into the topic, I would like to ask you a question: What do you know about the current traffic situation in Vietnam?
I am delighted to be here today to answer this question.
The purpose of this talk is to put you in the picture about the realities of Vietnam's traffic. For you to easy to understand, my presentation has 3 parts: infrastructure and vehicle issues; shortcomings and irresponsibility of those involved in operating and managing traffic; lastly, the consciousness of Vietnamese people in traffic.
I shall only take 4 minutes of your time. And if you have any questions, you can ask me after my presentation. Thank you.
First of all, I'd like to give you some background information about infrastructure and vehicle issues. A large number of authorities invested in the road but just a few had a good quality. Some routes just need light rain that will be damaged or flooded. Besides, the usage of the motorcycle is going up. According to a specific survey, Vietnam took a second position that had the largest motorcycles ownership in the world after Taiwan. In statistics in early 2016, a number of registered motorcycles in Vietnam was over 37 million, and as many as 9,000 new motorcycles join the roads each day. During the prime time of every day, especially holidays, we can see a long line of trapped traffic.
Secondly, there are still some shortcomings and irresponsibility of those involved in operating and managing traffic. Many traffic police officers offer informal fines and often take bribes instead of abiding by legal procedures and regulating traffic in a systematic manner.
Finally, the sense of participation in traffic of Vietnamese is poor. They go fast and routinely cross the red light. When being stuck at congestion, most people ride their motorbikes on the sidewalk rather than waiting, or constantly use horns to hasten riders in the front, even shouting at them from time to time. And It is not an uncommon sight to see two to four people on a single motorbike.
These are the actual realities of Vietnam's traffic, and because of those, the proportion of accidents in Vietnam still ranked in the top 10 nations of traffic accidents in the world despite a lot of traffic police, traffic inspectors, police officers, etc.
That brings me to the end of my presentation. Thank you for your attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91627906977 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93140987792 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.7681299262 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222732345371 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054404627412 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826438548405 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102449581133 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102994975134 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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